tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post5254877448544887886..comments2024-02-27T04:35:19.394-08:00Comments on and another thing...: The Fourth DraftJohnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08700441634700745541noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-28312519494463099172007-11-13T12:13:00.000-08:002007-11-13T12:13:00.000-08:00Hi,It's really the first time I'm on your web page...Hi,<BR/><BR/>It's really the first time I'm on your web page, been here before just to know what books to get. I'm sorry to say that my country (sweden) is not keeping up with me when it comes to your storys.<BR/>So I read your blog about that girl Heidi and how she felt about Louis and Angel, and I got jealous. Take great pride in your writing knowing how the boys you created are amazing. I adore Parker, but the boys (as I see it: My boys) well let me say it like this, I read every dead thing for the third time a week ago and the dialog and the feelings is still as sharp as the were the first time. <BR/>If I could change one thing, I would had let Angel kill Faulkner in The Killing Kind... <BR/>And thats why you are the writer and I'm the reader. <BR/>I would have sufficated Angel and Louis with pink pillows in la la land.<BR/>You keep them as they should be kept, thats what makes them and you great.<BR/>I wish I knew them as you do.<BR/>Thanks for charing tho :)<BR/>So boost your ego with this and good luck with your next book.<BR/><BR/>And I'm sorry about Susie<BR/><BR/>Best wishes, LottenLottenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14692066806799788681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-73160494379646035462007-11-03T11:50:00.000-07:002007-11-03T11:50:00.000-07:00John may you pleaseeeee write some more on your bl...John may you pleaseeeee write some more on your blog!Basma Sharafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00146001404875098720noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-10591307280830922432007-10-29T00:45:00.000-07:002007-10-29T00:45:00.000-07:00You make some very interesting points about relati...You make some very interesting points about relationships with characters. I have stopped reading a couple of diffrent series because I did not like where the characters went. Perhaps I should give them a fair shake again, with your outlooks in mind.<BR/><BR/>RIP to Susie.<BR/><BR/>~cheerskayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14036374413828047766noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-13111322601849439792007-10-24T08:27:00.000-07:002007-10-24T08:27:00.000-07:00On a slight tangent, I read Elmore Leonard's '10 R...On a slight tangent, I read Elmore Leonard's '10 Rules of Writing' today and one of them advised writers to avoid prologues. He said:<BR/><BR/><I>They can be annoying, especially a prologue following an introduction that comes after a foreword. But these are ordinarily found in nonfiction. A prologue in a novel is backstory, and you can drop it in anywhere you want. </I><BR/><BR/>I mention this because I have just stepped back from the second draft of my novel, and it most definitely includes a prologue. But prologues have been getting short shrift of late, including from agents who don't want to see one as part of your initial submission.<BR/><BR/>What are your thoughts on all this? Each to his own? What were your reasons for having a prologue, and do you think they are more acceptable in 'genre' writing?dfvsdvsdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07571021554165156986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-58122487331173741922007-10-19T18:34:00.000-07:002007-10-19T18:34:00.000-07:00This very topic (readers' expectations when it com...This very topic (readers' expectations when it comes to their fave characters, etc.) is a huge one. Witness the lather so many fans got into over the way Karin Slaughter ended her latest Grant County novel. Her fans were up in arms, many of them unwilling even to crack the book open after hearing in advance how the book ended. They felt utterly betrayed by how Ms. Slaughter handled her characters. I, on the other hand, thought the outcome was totally in keeping with what her characters have been and become. I'd have felt betrayed if she'd sailed along, never really having those characters live realistically, in keeping with the way she'd drawn them.<BR/><BR/>Keep doing what you're doing, Mr. Connolly. You may get some fans who want Louis, Angel, and Charlie to behave in certain ways comforting to them (the readers), but many of us simply want them to be true to themselves (even if that means we find ourselves unable to see them the same way from book to book).maldajunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01930458953011770611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-12056582676792529732007-10-19T09:12:00.000-07:002007-10-19T09:12:00.000-07:00Dear John, in your blog you wrote,"The way in whic...Dear John, in your blog you wrote,"The way in which we want our favorite characters to behave is not necessarily the way they should, or would, behave,given our knowledge of their natures." I totally agree with you. Now I'd like to use an example to explain why. Recently I went to see Lust, Caution by Ang Lee. The movie was about the forbidden and unspeakable love affair between a traitor, Mr. Yi, who worked for Japanese Government in pursuit of power and wealth, and China's patriotic secret agent, Wang Chia-Chi. The predator-and-prey relationship was at first full of tricks, suspicion,and uneasiness. Chia-Chi approached Mr. Yi so that he would fall in love with her and trusted her. She thought that by sacrificing her innocence and her body, she could create a better opportunity for her comrades to assassinate this evil guy. Luckily, Mr. Yi gradually fell into her trap and several times exposed himself in dangerous situations. The plan seemed to work perfectly, except she hadn't anticipated that she would actually fall in love with him! Before she was aware of it, their relationship had become full of explosive genuine passions and irresitable lust for each other.Near the end of the movie, in that critical moment when she could easily end his life, she was suddenly overwhelmed with very strong emotions of her love for him. She lost her caution and common sense, forgot her original purpose of life, and suddenly could not remember her years of pain and sacrifice were for this critical and rare opportunity to kill him and thus make great contributions to her beloved country. She was so overwhelmed with love and so touched by his love for her that she chose to let him get away. Her irrational and fatalistic decision saved his life and put herself and her comrades' lives at great risk. Sadly and not surprisingly, though Mr. Yi was deeply moved by Chia-Chi's love for him, he chose to end her life. Since he had a history of being selfish and cruel, why should he make an exception this time? This movie was very moving because it vividly depicts the complexity of human nature and human emotions. I believe many people, myself included, would like Mr.Yi to change his mind and become a better person by eloping with Chia-Chi to a far away place where no one could recognize their true identity. Over there, they could be together and lead a peaceful life with no deceptions. Sadly, in reality he can never make this kind of decision. If the screenwriter had become too sympathetic with Chia-Chi, this film would have been transformed from an art work with depth and meaning to a ludicrous soap opera.<BR/>John, you are absolutely right not to comform to the readers' impulsive wishes. And I think this article you just posted has revealed a facet of your character. It proves that when I met you in the book signing activity, my first impression on you is right: you are sincere, diligent, and affectionate. Although your literary work digs deeply into the darker sides of human nature, you have a beautiful mind, a tender soul, a strong will as well as a heart of gold. You have talents in writing and you care about people. I love your books and I love you even more.Although every person has rithts to express his or her opinions, it doesn't mean that you have to have to sacrifice your own and follow thiers. I like Rachael and Parker, and I would love them to be together. However, if in the future, out of necessity or as the story naturally evolves, you have to seperate them or make one of them disappear from your book, please go ahead and do whatever you have to do. I may feel sorry for them, but I will always be your fan. ALWAYS. One more thing. Last month, you only post one article in your blog. Could you post more often in the future so that I and the rest of your fans may have one more important and interesting thing to look forward to every week or every two weeks?<BR/>Also, I'm sorry Susie has to leave us. I don't know her, but I believe<BR/>she is extremely pleased that you remember her in a good way and cherish the time you spent with her. She must be smiling in heaven because she is not forgotten by people she cared about on earth.Annie Chenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01939547781458787801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-83423649961725980102007-10-18T20:33:00.000-07:002007-10-18T20:33:00.000-07:00It's your deliberate nature with your work that ma...It's your deliberate nature with your work that makes it all worthwhile to me, regardless of the choices you need to make. If you just blew through these drafts and tossed the books off quickly, we'd all be poorer. I may love or despise the characters actions, but they are true to the characters, and never the result of pandering to your readers. It engenders respect, and admiration, and the hope of eventual emulation, trust me.<BR/><BR/>And so sorry to hear about Susie.JT Ellisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08034115593738265631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22537743.post-38455155651184300852007-10-16T14:25:00.000-07:002007-10-16T14:25:00.000-07:00Its not strange that you're writing for the sake o...Its not strange that you're writing for the sake of writing. I think its vital for an author to keep writing everything and anything that comes to their mind, because it always opens up new horizons. If there's something I really regret doing, it is suppressing that urge to write what sometimes seemed "unimportant". And trust me, what you wrote up there is important :) Condolences on Susie. <BR/><BR/>Good luck with the latest (if its not the last)draft :)Basma Sharafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00146001404875098720noreply@blogger.com